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About Me Premium Member Deviously Deviant sampaguitaoreoMale/Philippines Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Years
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from my new story entitled "watercolor"

Mon Feb 14, 2005, 10:19 PM
chapter V. my song:

-she finds herself listening, she hears, a clash of strings errupting in a warm melody, a song so unfamiliar she does have to listen and stay, she stares at him like he was a lost star, for some reason she could feel his heartbeat telling a story through a song with each note ascending to the void piercing the moment, what is there between memories and the moment? her eyes breathing in overwhelming calmness, the moon casting heavy glances, the world turning and unaware, "love is existing, here and now" she confesses.

-she is frightened, knowing that the moment will soon pass in an instant, unmarked, not a single second will she let go, she feels the unfamiliar feeling as the song expresses the landscapes of aloneness and the warmth of existence.

-the melody modulating to the mood of leaving, she is fighting time, if she could only shout at him and tell not to stop, but she lacks courage, he is the dreamer and so she doesn't know the language of his dream.

-as the song fades tears escapes from her eyes, the agony of parting, the moment closer to oblivion.

-she ends up staring not into the boy, but into the depths of love, and that is the end of her secret...

the story is about a dream, a vague vision and this is all i could remember....

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:holly: MERRY CHRISTMAS:holly:

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pfwah. *stares*

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Oh my god...I hope your lola gets better, Carlo. My prayers go out to everyone there. Ingats.

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:iconplastick-haruka:
hoy carlo! that was deep man. i love your writing style, very poetic. and i see hidden messages... lol
:iconsampaguitaoreo:
plastickharuka...hi alison oh! thanks on your comment...really..take care ok? good luck on your school as well
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thanks dood. good luck with the band. i really like the website. ingats!
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Do u underdtand, my dear???????? I take un in watch too!!! ^^

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